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Fanfiction story.[message #168482] Sat, 22 December 2007 23:31 Go to next message
Fairy_Wilbury is currently offline Fairy_Wilbury

 
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Here is a story I've started writing... At the moment only one chapter is ready. And... Yes, it's about Mike.

(If I've chosen the wrong topic to put the story in - correct me please.)

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168484] Sat, 22 December 2007 23:34 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Introduction.

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168498] Sun, 23 December 2007 01:35 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Fairy_Wilbury
Here is a story I've started writing... At the moment only one chapter is ready. And... Yes, it's about Mike.

(If I've chosen the wrong topic to put the story in - correct me please.)


Looks good, but should be put in the War correspondent section, I guess one of our nice moderators will fix that for you, so continue in this thread (and please do continue)

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168514] Sun, 23 December 2007 04:46 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Very good stuff, keep it posting! Smile

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168530] Sun, 23 December 2007 17:24 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Thank u very much, guys.)) The next chapter will be posted soon. =)

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I guess one of our nice moderators will fix that for you


Oh, that's would be nice. I've just posted it here, 'cause I saw drawnings in this thread..

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168534] Sun, 23 December 2007 19:29 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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any relation to spike et all ?? Very Happy and yes we will move it as soon as we get to chop this section
:axe:

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168540] Sun, 23 December 2007 23:30 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Er-r.. Spike? Why?

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168542] Sun, 23 December 2007 23:44 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Wow, the flashback works great.
Evil-Gus is something I quickly got used to, thanks for writing/posting.

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168781] Wed, 26 December 2007 23:40 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Thanks!

Here is another chapter for you all:

Chapter 1. Fire!

There were two boxes standing one on the top of the other close to the door and Mike was now behind them with a pistol in his hand. The magazine case of his gun was already empty

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168798] Thu, 27 December 2007 14:18 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Cool!

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168970] Sat, 29 December 2007 16:44 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Oh wow, there could be room for an entire-book when Mike starts his flashback.

(I'm hoping Mike will get up - again.)

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168974] Sat, 29 December 2007 18:35 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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You killed...no wait, MIKE killed Ivan ! God-fucking-damnit thats just not right ! What will Igor say to his aunt ? Surprised

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #168998] Sun, 30 December 2007 00:15 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Ah, Mike and Ivan dead, too bad...heck, at least Gus could have got what was coming to him...

And...is the story...over?

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #169045] Sun, 30 December 2007 15:51 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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[quote=DNA from the Lowlands]Oh wow, there could be room for an entire-book when Mike starts his flashback.

(I'm hoping Mike will get up - again.)

Embarrassed Thank you.. Your comments are very improving)))

Yeah, sure, he will.. Well.. Not exactly get up, I mean, he's not feeling "well"), but still he'll stay alive. Wink It's just a beginning of the story, and it is about Mike, so...

2Caboclo:

Thank's =)

2Smert:

Sorry, Смерть.. *shy* Well, he had to kill someone... Everyone has his personal favorite there, so...
And, by the way, i wanted to put really_angry_Igor in the story in few chapters))

2MikeThePro:

As I said before, story isn't over and Mike isn't dead.. (How could I kill my favorite character?! I even couldn't dare to kill him while playing JA2)))

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #169052] Sun, 30 December 2007 16:32 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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duh, nobody called my name in russian Surprised

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #169060] Sun, 30 December 2007 18:06 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Hell yeah, that's a great plot twist.Keep the story going...To be honest, since I thought Mike was dead I kinda lost interest but now I can say I was wrong and am happy about it.

And Smert, Russian language is getting more popular nowadays...it's quite modern to know it around the globe...

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #169064] Sun, 30 December 2007 18:39 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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2Smert
He-he Wink

2MikeThePro
I perfectly understand you.. I would loose interest too=)
The next chapter is in progress, so coming soon.

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #169068] Sun, 30 December 2007 19:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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2MikeThePro

Right ! That's why I decided to take this nickname Very Happy
( BTW: Smert -> Death )

2Fairy

Hey can you include some fictional characters that were not in the game ? like other mercs, or "Tale of green militia" Very Happy

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #169072] Sun, 30 December 2007 20:11 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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2Smert:

There will be a fictional character - female one) Not a merc, no)

As for more fictional characters - well, I can't tell now, possibly...

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #169075] Sun, 30 December 2007 21:01 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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@Fairy:Great, I'll wait.And will Mike be shown outside of his job? I mean, I always imagined him being like that at work, staying unattached to anyone, but outside he probably has a family, and probably a reason he collects all the money...

@Smert:Guess you remember what a fun it was to read what Ivan was saying back in Ja1 when he spoke in Russian only.MAde me laugh at his "OK, I'll work for you, you damn capitalist "

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #169076] Sun, 30 December 2007 21:17 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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2MikeThePro

Yes, I will show him out of his job) Actually, the story is not about the way he fights, but the way he, as a character is.. That's why there are flashback's too - 'cause I want to show not only his present life, but his past too...
Your idea about the family is really interesting, but i imagined him a bit different person. You'll see, yeah =)
Now I feel myself much more confident - first I was afraid, that no one would be interested in stories, that go further and show more than you could see in the game...

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #169127] Mon, 31 December 2007 11:01 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Good job in making Mike's character interesting.

He only gets a few lines in the game

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #172936] Fri, 25 January 2008 01:15 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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2Fran:
Thanks. This character was always interesting for me.

2All:
Sorry for dalaying the next chapter - had exams at university and now going to Holland for my student holidays. Will post it as soon as possible.

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173035] Fri, 25 January 2008 13:04 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Sorry for dalaying the next chapter - had exams at university and now going to Holland for my student holidays. Will post it as soon as possible.

crikey , after sampling the famous dutch "hospitality" we'll be lucky to hear from you again :biglaugh:

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173228] Sat, 26 January 2008 22:57 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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w00t ! Holland ! Maybe we will meet there Razz

2 Lockie

What ? Dutch Fatality ??Surprised

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173230] Sat, 26 January 2008 23:26 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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What ? Dutch Fatality ??Surprised

ohh you know , little brown cakes and such :bandit: Very Happy

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173425] Mon, 28 January 2008 20:12 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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2lockie:

Ha-ha)) Why always people are laughing when u say "I'm going to Holland"?)))) In fact I wanted to see the country (read a lot about it),'cause it's a place of birth of my favorite actor. Rutger Hauer is his name. Bought his biography in dutch... *thinks hard how to read this language* ))) I'm keeping on writing the story here (half of the chapter is ready, not much of progress, but still..)

2Smert:

How? U want to come to Amsterdam? = )) It's a nice city anyway) My favorite country is still UK but this place is also impressive.

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173427] Mon, 28 January 2008 20:33 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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enjoyed amsterdam , bit claustrophobic in wee narrow streets n bloody bikes everywhere ,have you been to "teasers bar" yet , just up from station ? had a good night drinking there , almost avoided the red light district , but, honestly , stumbled upon it , and when i looked left to see a dominatrix growling at me, yikes !! whole red/l/d a bit comical really , good for a laugh Embarrassed :biglaugh: enjoy your vacation !

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173428] Mon, 28 January 2008 20:54 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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OMG))))) Nah, I'd better avoid this place) I mean not the bar Wink

Btw, sometimes it's better to be claustrophobic than hit by a car on HUGE streets of my hometown... I prefer narrow streets really)) Feeling safer..

Thanx)

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173798] Wed, 30 January 2008 18:18 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I can go to amsterdam, but first I must escape from my school beacus of studying Very Happy

Ok end of jokes, I am going only through. My destination is London(Goddamn that school...). But If you see a czech 2-floor school bus, then we shall meet :thinkerg:

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173955] Thu, 31 January 2008 15:10 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Amsterdam is a 'modern babylon'.
There's legal softdrugs over 200 coffeeshops and of course there'll be all the other dope.
Of course there's that RedLightDistrict.
It's just too bad our Rock'n'Roll legend jumped of the Hilton a few years back, or we would've had it all.

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173963] Thu, 31 January 2008 16:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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only dutch bands I know of are the earring and them mo'focus Very Happy
( actually really love the earring , got ALL cd's , except the very early crap)

EDIT: also dont see hooker that propositioned me in the photo , dont suppose shes still there , sigh .......

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #173965] Thu, 31 January 2008 16:51 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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shocking blue?

grz.


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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #174082] Fri, 01 February 2008 11:54 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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2Smert:
Nah, if I only could go to London now... It's my favorite city of all... Grrrmph... =.( U are lucky))))

I was in Haag close to the see imagining that London is somewhere on the horizon))))

2DNA from the Lowlands:
Are u dutch?) About drugs I've noticed - there are as many cofeeshops as bicyclesb in Amsterdam))


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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #174118] Fri, 01 February 2008 15:48 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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one thing I noticed in amsterdam was poor toilet facilities ,and after a few beers , well , lets just say if you gotta go , go , if not , dont ! :biglaugh:

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #174125] Fri, 01 February 2008 16:28 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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ROFL your scottish but ye know pretty much things 'bout Dutchs eh ? Very Happy

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #174128] Fri, 01 February 2008 16:55 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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not really , visited a few times thats all ,had a few playing for the team I support ,and wee dick advocaat as manager , so familiar ever so slightly Very Happy

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #174677] Tue, 05 February 2008 02:29 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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So I am back home and here is another chapter for you = ) It's almost about the past here.. Well, enjoy)

Chapter 2. It is all over (again?).

Gus, Lynx, Scully and Reaper found themselves in the countryside just a quarter of hour later. Tired of a long walk they

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #174755] Tue, 05 February 2008 16:54 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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keep writing , story's coming along nicely , back to university though , work , work , work Very Happy

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Re: Fanfiction story.[message #174762] Tue, 05 February 2008 17:07 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
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Well, actually my university starts only the next monday - so I have some more time))
Thanks = )

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