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Re: Frank "Hitman" Hennessy's Combat Guide![message #218472]
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Sat, 30 May 2009 12:44
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cougar |
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So is that pdf the version you want up? Sadly I have no time to get it up this weekebd or next week, but should try to do it the week after.
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Re: Frank "Hitman" Hennessy's Combat Guide![message #231975]
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Fri, 28 August 2009 21:50
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LootFragg |
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Registered:August 2009 Location: Berlin, Germany |
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Great tutorial. I don't know how new players would take it, but since I know the shortcuts and most of the tactical issues, I think the way this information is brought to novices is superb.
The PDF looks nice, but I think it needs improvement. I don't think you can include animated GIFs in PDF, right? Well, I don't know it. But the leapfrog movement could be presented as an animation.
The layout needs some work done. I'm with Laha on this one, the size is good, but I'd put them on the left hand of the text and add some colour.
I myself would have favored cutting the images first to get rid of anything unnecessary and then merging some in a "DO / DON'T" or "PREVIOUSLY / AFTER" way.
The strategy lessons are fine. Backup, close movement, watch your back, don't go into the open... all said. Can't think of more one needs to add.
I love the humour and the whole self-irony and presentation of what you can do wrong. It would be great if you added even more story to it. Not too much, it's meant to be a tutorial after all, but when reading, I loved the connection from one topic to another. Like "We were just explaining how to watch each other's backs and since this has been successful, we're now showing you how to aim at heads." Absolutely great.
So basically all I'm saying is that even though it's no help to me, I loved reading this tutorial and I'd love to read a finished version that's got layout and text boxes and color-coded text and such. Ace.
@Laha: Why is everyone picking on Ira? I like her, because she admits that she's no master at shooting and such and she's no bigshot. She sucks anyway and she usually dies the natural way, helping out as cannon fodder, but she's not too annoying is what I'm saying.
Flo is annoying. She doesn't even have a problem with being married to Rednecks. Any mod that allows selling mercs to San Mona's entertainment industry?
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